Show don’t tell

The boy was sad

Sight blurred with water, the warmth of the tears heated his cheeks as they glowed a bright red. His teeth were vibrating as his jaw shook rapidly. eyes hanging low, he scanned the ground for a way to get out.

Ears turned up, patiently he waited by the door. The sound of heavy breathing echoed throughout the house. tensing his body eager for his owner to appear. his tail waved happily as owner walked up to the door.

The air crisp and we could tell winter was arriving. The mountains high above are able to be seen on the ice floor, with the sun heating the frozen lake.

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